Since you have read my storyboard, you may have noticed that I decided to go back and interview Athena, the owner of Remix Apparel Exchange. The story has a definite human interest vibe, as Athena and her family have always been thrifty and they all share a “treasure hunting gene.”
Please view my rough draft. I realize that I need titles to give facts about Remix. I am working on these now. Feedback would be greatly appreciated.